Coming along nicely there. Not too sure about those ears though, they seem to stick out way too far from the side of the head. There's also a strange double-line to the brow on the left hand side but that could just be the way shadows are falling. Might be a tiny splinch on the end of the nose too. The lips are pretty darn good though, and the eyes are excellent - so many people get eyes wrong.
Thank you, the eyes were a pain to do, mostly because i kept having a shadow cast on the inside of the eye :/
Yeah i know about the ear, i find them pretty awful but i need to redo the modeling around them, and i prefered focusing on the Skin for now. when the hair will be done (and the eyebrown and all) i'll probably get back to them. Expect the lighting to change a little too
Maybe i'll post how my texture looks, because i made quite some only for the skin (about 4 or 5 for the different layers of skin )
Très bon WIP ! Globalement ton perso tient bien esthétiquement parlant. L'éclairage met bien en valeur le perso ( le rendu est super avec la backlight qui donne un jolie contour speculaire).
Je compatis à la difficulté de la modélisation de l'oreille, en fait je pense que si tu enlevais le creux au niveau la jonction mâchoire/oreille ça passerais mieux. Pour la texture des lèvres, hésite pas à piquer les lèvres d'une star en haute résolution et plaquer en texture en noir/blanc pour donner du bump un peu plus irrégulier et donc plus crédible.
Bon courage pour les sourcils, et les cheveux, ça dé pend de quelle méthode tu vas employer ( cheveux en poly ou hair and fur ou autre ). En tout cas ça prend beaucoup de temps
yes, nan mais l'oreille je sais exactement quoi faire pour la corriger, c'est juste que j'ai la fleme de le faire ^^
pour la pilosité, ce sera fait avec le hair and fur
quand a la texture, le but etait de tout faire hand painted, histoire de tester mes skills. D'ailleurs je risueencore de la changer un peu, héhéhé, a suivre !
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